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JapaneseTeeth


A guy with too much time on his hands. Enjoys writing and over-analyzing things.

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  • 400 weeks
    Update

    So for those of you following my latest story, I just wanted to let everybody know that the next chapter will be delayed a bit for three reasons:

    1. It's basically the climactic chapter, so it'll take longer to put together.

    2. This Monday I leave on vacation and probably won't be able to get much writing done.

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  • 443 weeks
    Okay so here's what's up.

    1. I have the first chapter of a new thing up. I've had the idea literally bouncing around in my head for years and I figured I'd finally try to write it. It's not a super-complicated project or anything, but I figured I'd try something new after my other story was suffering writer's block.

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  • 472 weeks
    Chapter 3

    Yeah, just letting everybody know I got the first draft done. Will hopefully have it up in the next few days.

    In the meantime, have this:

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  • 474 weeks
    Yes, I'm still alive.

    Sorry for the delay. The next chapter ended up being longer than I anticipated. It's nearing completion, it's just taking some extra time. At least you'll be getting more content after the wait.

    Have this while you wait for me to finish it up.

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  • 480 weeks
    Update

    The first draft of chapter 2 is finally done and undergoing editing. If anybody wants to help proofread, PM me or something.

    Eesh, this one was rough for some reason.

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Feb
11th
2014

Proofreaders wanted · 3:18am Feb 11th, 2014

So, I've been working on a secondary project in between ADB chapters (Because I have to take a break from shipping occasionally), and was wondering if anybody would want to take a swing at prereading it. Because it needs it. It's a pretty much straight-up comedy story, which I haven't really tried writing as a while. It's a one-shot, at around 8K words, and it's not exactly emotionally draining. There's no rush or anything; I just like getting as many people to look things over as I can manage. If you want to take a swing at it, just leave a comment.

In other news, I'm about 2000 words into the new ADB chapter. It's been fun to write so far, and it's a nice change of pace from the smoothness of the past few chapters. No idea how long it's going to be in the end.

Also, Rarilight moment:

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Comments ( 21 )

Because I have to take a break from shipping

Blasphemy

1821463 Cool. PMing you the link.


1821462 I've written over 200,000 words on it, and that's only one pairing!

I'll help you! My only question is, would you only like my opinion on it or would you also like help with editing? To be more specific, do you want a proofreader, so that you can see how a reader perceives the story or do you want someone to point out grammatical/structural errors?


P.S. I love Rarlight, so I'm happy you noticed that scene. I found a couple of others, too. fimfiction-static.net/images/story_images/161967_r.jpg?1390229452 fimfiction-static.net/images/story_images/162741_r.png?1390444618

Hmm.

It might take me a while, but I would be willing if you don't mind waiting a few days.:twilightsheepish:

1821640
It's blasphemy! Indulge the shipping. Feed it. Nourish it. Love it.

cry because you'll never snuggle a pony

I'd like to volunteer my prereading services, since you're asking

1821728 Both, if at all possible. I generally try to gather as much feedback as possible, and good feedback on characterization and plot is really tough to find. And of course, more eyes looking for grammar/typo things find more.

1821774 That's fine. I probably wouldn't even get around to editing until the weekend at the earliest anyway. It likely won't get published for another week or two.

Pre-reading, sure i can help you on that JT, Just let me know how soon you need the feedback, i should have free time this wensday.

As usual, I'm willing to help. :twilightsmile:

I volunteer as well. :pinkiesmile:

I volunteer as Tribute! No wait. I mean Pre-reader. I do the reading thing. All the volunteering in the comments just made me think of that quote.

Is it me or has Twilight been using her 'peaceful, gentle and sensual eyes' look a lot more this season? Is it an alicorn thing - you are more serene and wise?

I'm always willing to look it over if you still need someone.

This seems like a reportable abuse of the story tagging feature :applejackunsure:

1828151 Blog posts can be used for more than one thing, you know.

1828306 Except sticking a few sentences onto an unrelated blog post creates more problems than it solves, especially since making two separate ones doesn't take any extra effort.

*shrug*

I talk about the story in the post. Even if it's only briefly and not the only content, I figure it still counts. It's not like I tagged an unrelated story. Next time I'll probably make separate ones.

1828707 I figured pointing it out was better than reporting you. I nitpick because I care. :raritywink:

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