My First Literature Pie Video!

Hey guys,

The moment has arrived. Today, my first contribution to the Literature Pie channel has launched. Today I talk about the first element of what I feel makes a great story. In order to keep things horsey, I look at a fandom classic, which displays varying degrees of success (or lack thereof) in all three areas.

Enjoy!

Comments

[LoneUnicornWriter]

Alright, that fifteen minutes was solid gold Man, even watching you in person is awesome! But yeah even still I don't get what makes a description enticing. I have written quite a few terrible stories true, and I have to keep writing but does the premise get better with experience and if so experience in what? Or is a premise just the idea you used for your writing and you just write it in for others to find out? Does that work for like doing crossovers and stuff, does it apply to all types of genres or specifics?

[Biker_Dash]

Watching it now... We should get coffee and talk stories sometime

[Agri_Yob]

I already knew it was going to be Past Sins when you mentioned that it was a prominent story in the fandom.

[Sypher]

I think I'll be following this, even if I don't really ever have plans on writing a story.