For those of you who have been reading my story, I did some major revision on the first chapter.  I also changed the ending of the first chapter since I thought it had more of a realistic twist to it.  

I hope to post the second chapter really soon.  So far, I have written a draft but in my mind it is bland with no pizazz to it.  So, I need to do some major hesitating on the second chapter and make it more readable and fun for the fans.