Pre readers/editors whatever. The whole nine yards

SO...in my other blog I stated how I had a "block". Well,to me, it seems as this block might be hindering my stories to a point to where I see it fit to come ask for help. I always needed help, but this is different. My "block" has unclogged only a little , and only allows portions of the brain fluids to drain, so I'm not getting the full essence of my ideas. That's where whoever takes this position comes in. I would like someone to check over my stuff (I'll check yours if wanted) and tell me if it matches the flow of the story. If you're up for the job then ,by Celestia, comment or PM yours truly.