Strike One · 7:11pm
Alright so my submission to EqD didn't pull through. But that's okay! However, this means I'm going take down the chapters temporarily and fix a LOT of things. I'm not really going to change a lot in the flow of the story, but some of the flow may shift or change, so it may be critical to go back and reread through, JUST in case something is new. I'm really sorry for this, but Pre-Reader X sent back a message with lots of grammatical errors and such. I'm going to fix as much as I can according to this, and resubmit and hope for the best.
Also, this will really set back Chapter 5 so, I'm probably going to be late but, things will be back to normal soon, promise. Wish me luck guys.