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gryphon88


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  • 304 weeks
    Notifications Error

    Hello all
    I've been getting the same notifications error for more than a year: they appear in the top utility bar, but the notification center consistently appears empty.
    I've submitted a few error reports, to no avail.
    So, if you really need me to see something, please comment on this here blog post.

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  • 324 weeks
    To Anyone Who Comments

    My notifications tab is busted beyond belief, it tells me when I get them but insists I have none.
    It's been doing this for ages now, no-one on the bug site is doing squat
    So, if you really want me to hear something, PM me. That way you know I'm ignoring you on purpose.
    Ciao!

    0 comments · 261 views
  • 354 weeks
    Update

    I've been slowly working towards coming back to FimFiction for a while now, but I sense a sudden rush upon the horizon, floods of old fans re-upping their interest, because of the movie. Which looks super good.
    (I'm bending over backwards to avoid saying br*nies, in case you didn't notice. It implies something different, I feel.)

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  • 360 weeks
    URL change

    If you don't like it, post a long and detailed comment why. It'll be fun to ignore.
    It's an homage to two of my most popular fics, from way back.
    Follow me on twitter

    2 comments · 355 views
  • 443 weeks
    You'd think I'd be tired of "human in Equestria stories" by now

    And I am.


    Happy Back to the Future Day, you godless heathens.

    0 comments · 467 views
Nov
15th
2013

Hm · 7:58am Nov 15th, 2013

Actually, I used that chapter I scrapped.
It had a lot of good things in it, along with the bad. And I reminded myself that I'm working for myself, to learn to press forward.
Also, Gary.

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Comments ( 3 )

Keep the good tings, rewrite the bad :pinkiecrazy:

1509462 They're more like individual pieces of narrative, that aren't strung together well. Also I devolve into Third Person Omniscient, which is a crime against humanity.

Third Person Omniscient is okay, as long as you use it to describe past or future. Using it in present tense usually makes my brain hurt(or has 9000 POV switches). Solution is to tell story taught actions (usually deevolves into: "They had rage in their faces" or "She smiled with kindness") witch is kinda cheesy.
Solution is the Hive mindâ„¢. Now with 90% less free will. Or you could hint at character motivations beforehand.

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