Apr
9th
2013
About that palate cleanser... · 11:40pm Apr 9th, 2013
Yeah. It's about three paragraphs, a quick revision, a title and two descriptions away from completion. It's also bedtime, so it's going to come out tomorrow night, one week after the fic it was meant to wash away rather than one day. But it's delicious humanized SweetieMac with lots of teasing and awesome footfetishery, so hopefully it'll hit the spot. I just need a damn title...
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Neon Czolgosz · 328 views
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Singin that sweet sole song.
So, it's based on that comic? I don't know which one, not PonyHoof, but one of those porn comics, think it was PalComix, did a story similar to this.
Either way, more from Mr. Axe is always a good thing!
By the by, did you happen to catch the new Evil Dead? I fucking loved it. Not perfect, but the tone and the atmosphere matched perfectly, and oh, dear god the lovely gore...
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Wait, THAT comic? No. Oh shit no. Not at all based on that comic, noooo. Anything that involves Snips being pegged by Granny Smith Apple wouldn't be much of a palate cleanser at all...
Here's a few titles for you...
'Sing for me'
'High Notes'
'Sonata of Pleasure'
'Singing for Apples'
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What, you mean you DON'T want to see Featherweight get gang-banged by a bunch of beefy Royal Guards while Celestia watches?
What, are you some kind of freak?!
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Well, Featherweight is a cutie, but we've already seen him sucking Pipsqueak's cock for the priviledge of eating Pip's jizz out of his girlfriend's slit, so, not rushing to write that particular scene.
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Never change, Mr. Axe.
Hmm. "Pianissimo," perhaps?
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That. Fucking perfect. That is my title. You are a fuckin' legend.
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Eh. I have my moments. Glad to be of assistance.
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Actually, I've changed my mind. 'Pianissimo,' 'Pianoforte' and 'Crescendo' are perfect chapter titles. So, you're still a legend but I need a title...
Sweetie is going to be aged?
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Clearly I'm missing something here. How is musical terminology perfect for a SweetieMac foot fetish fic?
"This little Sweetie went to Market"
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Because significant parts of the fic are dedicated to teasing and flirting, hence very soft (pianissimo) in the first chapter, soft-loud (pianoforte) in the second, and rising to a crescendo in the third.
What is this I don't even...
"Sweet Apple Fritters!"
"Licking McFoot"
"Teasing and Pleasing"
"Foot Fungus and Oral Yeast"
"Serenade of Sweetie Belles"
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You're just jelly because i gave it precedence over your tasty maids.
996233 Oral Yeast is not a joke. It could really ruin your day!
Be honest.
This was an April Fool's Day joke. There is no story.
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It's completed and awaiting moderation. It failed it the first time because I didn't make it clear that Sweetie Belle was aged up. If you promise to give me a nice, juicy comment, I'll PM you a link...
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I'll be travelling all day so I won't get a chance to read it early. I promise to provide a comment anyway, though :)