Finally, the rewriting and editing are done!

I wish there was a way to get you guys to read my story again without going up in views, because I did some changes! I tried subtle changes, to elevate the emotion in some scenes, change what's at stake, and make the sequence of events flow better throughout the story.

If you don't feel up to re reading everything, I can point you to some places where things got interesting. The last half of desertion got a lot of touching up, as well as the opening and ending scenes of Arrival. If you really don't feel like reading it at all, I can just pm you what happened. Leave a comment and I'll do just that.

Now, for the news you guys have been wanting: ON TO CHAPTER 5! It already hs a lot written, but it too will be getting a once over on the scale of chapters 1-4. It should make it much more engaging.

Finally, I know out of all of you SOMEONE has some questions for me! Comment my story, leave me a pm, anything, and I'll gladly answer it (depending on how much you ask). I love having a back and forth with my readers; I'm doing this for you! Well, and me too. I'm having so much fun unraveling this story myself, for your pleasure. It seems enough of you like it too!

So anyways, I'm back in the game. It's good to be back. Season 3 came and gone, and it didn't even shake up my story much, if at all. Well, ignoring the finale. I hope we can have a fun time this seasonal drought, and I'm looking forward to great times ahead.

Huzzah!