If it can go wrong, it's happened to Tristan Shay.
After his mother dies due to illness, the friendless, twenty-two year-old college dropout is forced to live on his own in an old house he's renting just outside of the city. One day, he receives a scroll in the mail from someone who calls their self "Princess Celestia", saying something about seven guests who will be taking a month long field trip to "his" world. This has to be the weirdest prank mail he's ever gotten...
Very first story ever. No sad rating due to only a few paragraphs of sad stuff that comes later in the story and the Teen rating is for light sexual content and possible flirting/shipping. Constructive criticism is always welcome :)
w00t. wanna read more...it's short..really but i love the story idea
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Lol, there's a lot more to the story yet to come, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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my curiosity has been peaked
1053789![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Lol, glad to hear that!
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I do believe I shall enjoy this. TRACKING ENGAGED!
You seem to be jumping awfully fast into this.
Slow it down a bit. it would make it a bit more realistic. Then again, it's a story.
I still enjoy it, those were just some small faults.
1055107![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
Thanks for your input. I was actually wondering if I was speeding through a tad. But none the less, I appreciate the comment. And I'm glad you're enjoying the story
Shit's gonna hit the fan once they find the ham...![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
1055249![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Lol, it just might
:3 First.
Dis chaptah b gud sheyt.
1056590![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I tried taking your advice the best I could. Not sure if I followed that completely through or not, but I'm glad you like it, regardless!
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I meant that you should slow down on things like the 'anatomy' thing in the first chapter. that joke would've fit prfectly the next day or o when Twi wants to learn about humans. Not ten minutes after they get there.
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Ah, lol. I understand now. I originally intended that statement to be something that AJ thought Twilight was implying, not necessarily Twilight hitting on Tristan, but in retrospect, I can definitely see your point :)
Observing and waiting. Let's see where this goes.
Well that was a lil awkward
but still gets 5/5![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Meanwhile at the neighbor's house across the street
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There could have only been one way to make this funnier.
Pause for dramatic effect...
Awkward boner-poke.
good chapter bro!
1076751![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Lol, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Excellent work spazzy.
1077436![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
Thank you!
I liek it. And it looks like somones got a crush
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Well i really liked this chapter, good job![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
1079427![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
Lol, thank you. And who knows?
1079583![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
I Applaud you for being so good at setting up harems.
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:3
Good chapter![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
...Wait'll they get ahold of Red Bull.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
1086105![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Thanks!
Ha, AJ stealing peeks at her new chest puppies. I think she likes them.
a man gotta do what he gotta do, FIRST!
now...
loving this story so far, cant wait for more
1096953![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Dammit Twilight quite taking his smokes! Those are expensive!!!!!!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
:3
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Great chapter as always![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1126937![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Thank you!
I'm kicking myself for passing over this story for so long its awesome +3 manly
for you
1128179![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
*sips some coffee and waits staring at the screen*
I would have laughed so hard if they had "accedentally" lost track of time in the clothes story
oh and thanks for this chapter it maybe a little on the short side but at least it satisfes my inner MOAR! monster.
keep up the awesome work mate![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
1142249![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Thanks! I will!
1142255 my inner moar monster thanks you. lol![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
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You have sated my hunger for casual comedy/romace/(and/or)adventure stories. Woops, look at the time, i'm hungry again.
Table Flip![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
This story does not have enough recognition. For that you get my bi-annual moustache.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
1159404![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)
Thank you! Moustaches are always appreciated!