I want to take a moment to self-promote my ongoing novella which has slipped below the radar. I think it's an interesting story with neat ideas that are starting to take shape.
Boom.
I didn't think through the "lots of bad stories have OP OC characters compared to Twilight" angle of Irreversible, probably because I neither read nor write stories of that sort. This was an unfortunate oversight, especially since Eclipse's powers aren't super-relevant to the story.